This is my first montage. Two of my friends and me are the players and I edited it and captured it.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkH2Y9iHyrI

not horrible. not great. good clips here and there. learn how to use some after affects and introduce yourself to some better intro's and youll be on your way to some good montages. overall 3/5.

thanks =]. most affect cost money on my software so. =/

I didn't even watch it right after I saw the "Tritage" at the beginning. I already saw that you were an amateur editor that couldn't really edit. You should've first looked at some of the average montages and seen how there intros are. Intro should've been laid back and simple and the text sucked. The gameplay was average and I'm not gonna hate on it for having social gameplay, even so, it wasn't that great. Please don't make excuses about it being your first time editing because the only thing Fragtality edited before Dualtality was a 1 minute short. You need to spend time on your work, get feedback, and give it a feel/emotion/idea and portray that as best as you can, in a creative way so it stands out from the normal. Try to listen to a song and close your eyes, and envision the perfect montage to that song. Then recrewate it as best you can. You cna ask others to help if you're not familiar with how to do something. Keep going on man. Sorry if I sounded rude but you're never gonna get better if people always tell you that your good or that montage was good so don't take it personally.

-Fatal

No thank you. I like that you gave me good feedback. Ill try harder on my next one. I'll take everything you said in to consideration.